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This man has fixed bikes for free…
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#098Story & format Hard

Mini Documentary

Best for: Documentaries, interviews, local stories

The hook

Say
This man has fixed bikes for free for ten years.

The first 3 seconds

  1. 0.0sB-roll of the person at work. Voiceover: “This man has fixed bikes for free for ten years.”
  2. 1.5sClose-ups of their hands and face.
  3. 2.5sThe question hangs there: why?
  4. 3.0sThe viewer wants the story.

Why it works

A documentary cold open introduces a person, a place and a question in one sentence.

What you need

  • Someone or something with a story
  • B-roll: extra footage of them, their hands, their place
  • A voiceover script

Step by step

Plan

  1. Find someone or something near you with a story: a local shop, a hobby, a place.
  2. Ask permission to film, and to post.

Film

  1. Film lots of B-roll: hands, faces, the place, small details.
  2. Record a short interview, then your voiceover.

Edit

  1. Open with one surprising fact over the B-roll.
  2. End with a line that sticks.

Use it in your niche

  • LocalThis café has served the same soup for 40 years.
  • SportThis 70-year-old skates every single morning.
  • CraftThis woman builds guitars by hand in her garage.

Pro tips

  • The first sentence should have a person, a place and a surprise.
  • Let the person tell the story in their own words.

Avoid

  • Filming people without permission.
  • A slow start. Open with the most surprising fact.

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